User:Dtalla/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Dark Girls

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is an article that talks about a documentary I have watched which highlights some of the struggle of dark girls. As a black women I can relate to some of the stories in the documentary which this article summarizes wonderfully. It is a well written article, overall cited properly.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is concise and provides a nice overview of the documentary. The content of the article is relevant and provides some crucial scenes of the documentary. In addition, it includes one of the main aspects of the documentary which is skin bleaching. This article is neutral and does a good job at summarizing the documentary while mentioning the impact it had on the audience. Most sources and references are reliable and relevant to the main topic. The only source that I couldn't find a direct link to is about one of the directors of the film, D. Chansin Berry. I think that is the only aspect I would like to improve on this article.