User:Dude1107/Sabertooth fish/Aliceli23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dude1107


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sabertooth fish


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sabertooth fish

Evaluate the drafted changes
Just to be consistent with the formatting I would take out the "with" in the parenthesis specifying the dorsal fin rays. I like the addition of the hyperlinks for terms such as "pectoral fins" and "spineless". Since the mesopelagic zone is 200m-1000m and the zones mentioned for the larvae is 50m-100m, I would change the wording of that sentence. Overall, the edits were great in specifying existing information on the page and hyperlinking certain terms to reduce confusion