User:Dude1107/Sabertooth fish/ZachRumley Peer Review

Peer Review Sabertooth Fish

I assigned myself the Sabertooth fish article for peer review and looked at the two different versions created by the group working on this page. The additions to the article were insightful and helpful towards better understanding the organism. Also, hyperlinking words that were not previously hyperlinked helps readers to better understand the text without requiring specific knowledge about the deep-sea or specifically, the sabertooth fish. I would suggest to try and find articles that can support the contributions to this page, such as citing an article that states similar findings to the range of depths which sabertooth larvae and adults live. I would suggest to try and find more sources to add to the page, but overall all the additions look great.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dude1107


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dude1107/Sabertooth_fish?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sabertooth fish

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I assigned myself the Sabertooth fish article for peer review and looked at the two versions created by the group working on this page. The additions to the article were insightful and helpful toward a better understanding of the organism. Also, hyperlinking words that were not previously hyperlinked helps readers to better understand the text without requiring specific knowledge about the deep sea or, specifically, the sabertooth fish. I would suggest trying to find articles that can support the contributions to this page, such as citing an article that states similar findings to the range of depths in which sabertooth larvae and adults live. I suggest trying and finding more sources to add to the page, but overall all the additions look great.