User:Dudleydoodog/Transducin/Biochem2024 Peer Review

General info
Dudleydoodog
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Dudleydoodog/Transducin
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Transducin

Evaluate the drafted changes
In regard to the sections edited, the statements they included are each linked to a citation that comes from reliable databases. While most of the edits are clear, I do suggest that they change the transition phrase "As well as" to another to make the sentence flow. Additionally, they should remove the contraction "shouldn't" and instead use the formal version of "should not". There are no images/media of the isoforms they wrote of, and so, maybe that can be more information they can contribute to. And in regard to the different isoforms, maybe they can list them to include more information about their topic.