User:Dudu120/Environmental health/Sportsphreak73 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Dudu120)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dudu120/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There appear to be several instances of something stated as fact that does not have a linked source cited throughout the entire article.

The link function was not tested, because there were too few links.

Consider using bullet points for Gene-diet Interactions section.

The second paragraph under the last sentence ends a little too abruptly, and may need to be moved down to blend with the third paragraph, maybe?

There were a few typos throughout the text.