User:Dududungha/Empathy/Jonathany1pp Peer Review

General info
Dududungha
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dududungha/Empathy?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Empathy

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead: Has been edited to include more sources and to better describe what empathy really means.
 * Content: Did not edit.
 * Tone and Balance: The tone of the content is neutral.
 * Sources and References: A few sources were added that were a part of a reliable source for media to be used from.
 * Organization: Makes the lead a lot more cohesive and easier to read while providing more context for their statements.
 * Images: As empathy is an emotion, it might be hard to add additional images as there is not really a specific way to visualize empathy. Unsure though.
 * Overall: The changes were good and can't wait to see the rest of the changes as the quarter goes on.