User:Dunkirk05/DayZ (video game)/Knee2020 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dunkirk05


 * Link to draft you're reviewing.
 * Editing User:Dunkirk05/DayZ (video game) - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * DayZ (video game) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The edits that have been made are clear and concise. As someone who is unfamiliar with the game, I was able to follow and understand what was being explained. There were two words or phrases that were underlined in red, indicating that there may have been a spelling error. These were "Salmenellosis" and "basebuilding". The correct spelling would be "Salmonellosis" and "base building", or "base-building". The lead of your article is easy to understand, your writing has a clear structure with balanced coverage, you stayed neutral, as well as provided reliable sources.