User:DvDel/Josaphat Bulhak/Jzdollar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DvDel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DvDel/Josaphat_Bulhak?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? - Everything is relevant, but I was distracted by phrases such as "he got higher education" what higher education? What should be said instead is that He recieved a doctorate in theology at the collegio urbano or something to that effect. In the latter portion of the writing pastoral letters are mentioned but not disclosed. In the context of the polish rebellion, why would distributing these letters be relevant?
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? - No detectable bias
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * - i assume not
 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * - There are links when needed and they do work
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * - no, there are no sources cited
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?
 * -I cant tell but I assume its in date
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * - no, there are no sources cited
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?
 * -I cant tell but I assume its in date
 * -I cant tell but I assume its in date