User:Dvigna/Hair analysis/Kristinapham Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dvigna


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dvigna/Hair_analysis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hair analysis

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is an interesting topic to edit for sure - sucks that it's not as relevant today! I can see that you are still developing your edits in your sandbox, so I do not have much to say. What you have so far does help it ALS section flow better.

Maybe one thing that you could consider adding to the article are more references, particularly for those larger paragraphs containing loads of information. Otherwise I think the links and references elsewhere look good! Also, I know that mitochondrial DNA is a relevant technique today, so maybe that could be a topic to add to the article?

It is a difficult article to choose, I'm excited to see how'll improve it!