User:Dvuliudsklifski/Petrushka/Margaret UW-Madison Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dvuliudsklifski


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dvuliudsklifski/Petrushka
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Petrushka
 * Petrushka

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like puppets, so this article was of particular interest to me. I found that the lead statement drew me in as a reader and sufficiently supported the subsequent narrative details. I liked the description and images, as well as the plot examples. Your revision nicely expands on key dates and events that transpired in the evolution of the puppet and its role and function.

What's the most important thing you could do to improve the article? Perhaps consider additional details about the regional variations or political/social influences? Also, explore the position of Petrushka in the larger community of puppetry arts and any contemporary connections?