User:Dwill1209/Bonnie Bennett (The Vampire Diaries)/Meganboddy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dwill1209


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dwill1209/Bonnie_Bennett_%28The_Vampire_Diaries%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead is good but maybe try to reference the casting of the character in the lead a little bit more because the lead is supposed to summarize everything being talked about. Based off your lead i would maybe consider doing a section on the relationship she had with other characters. The content you give is important to the topic and is up to date. I wouldn't say content is missing but the lead is a little misleading in which part of the character you will be talking about. The article is not biased in any way and does not persuade you in any way. The sources are updated enough and are accurate on their information regarding the topic. The only thing I'm unsure about is the wiki fandom account and whether that would be considered a good source or not. All of the sources vary in their information basis and all of the links work. The content is very clear and concise making it easy to read. There were only a few spelling mistakes and i fixed them. The information is organized and in a good order. The picture is put in a good spot and labeled well so everyone knows what the picture is of. The picture also follows the copyright rules. The article does have three sources and fits wikis guidelines. The article does link to other articles surrounding the show. The article follows similar patterns to similar articles just shorter. Overall i think you have a lot of good information that is imperative to knowing the character. In order to improve it i would just add a section or two to enhance the information given. Strengths include bringing up the differences of all of the seasons and how her character is different in the book then the movie.