User:Dwlehm1/Bernold of Constance/HammeringHank7 Peer Review

These changes would be an improvement to your article by providing more information for the reader and the additional sources would provide more credibility to your writing.

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 * The article has good information that you have found, and it has been brought forth in a strait forward manner. The article is easy on the eyes, and I had no difficulty reading it. What impressed me is your direct form of writing. Some changes that I would suggest for the article are adding more content. Content to include in your article would be more context for Bernold of Constance. What was their early middle and late life like? What are some other important figures in their life? More content to add would be more of their works of art and who influenced them to create. Who played a part in their life and how did it affect their painting. Another change to add would be adding more sources. You will be able to add more content by doing more research and that will give you debt to your article. There is just not a lot of information on this slide, nor are there a lot of sources for the reader to draw upon.
 * Do you have any images of Bernold that you could add or any images of his work? You should be able to add some images. These changes would be an improvement to your article by providing more information for the reader and the additional sources would provide more credibility to your writing.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Do you have any images of Bernold that you could add or any images of his work? You should be able to add some images. These changes would be an improvement to your article by providing more information for the reader and the additional sources would provide more credibility to your writing.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

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