User:Dwr002/COVID-19 vaccination in the United States/Hwubb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Dwr002)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * COVID-19 vaccination in the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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For your lead, it looks very well detailed and explains what you are talked about. Some of the big things I noticed is that in the article there are times were there will be a whole paragraphs with statistics and no citations. For citations it is really hard to find scholarly articles because this such a new topic and it progresses everyday. The citations you have look good. During the July and September of 2021 the topic gets a little controversial. I would read that a couple times to make sure that it did not lean to another side and stayed neutral. Also for the US Military's portion you could maybe give an update on what it looks like right now? Overall content and grammar looks good. Your article looks good. Keep up the good work!