User:Dyaffa/ATP Challenger Tour/Meadowsadeh382004 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dyaffa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dyaffa/ATP Challenger Tour
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * ATP Challenger Tour

Evaluate the drafted changes
- To start, I think you should take what has been written already and rewrite it / fix any grammar mistakes the writer may have made. It gives you a nice base and personally it helped me understand the concept more.

- All your content is up to date and is relevant to the subject. It is also neutral.

- Try and add sources into the paragraph or the following paragraphs for the same section.

- Add a photo if possible. Make sure to state the source of the picture.

- I believe there are many run on sentences in your paragraph. As I read, everything bunches together and its hard to understand. I think you should try and split up the sentences and stop using the same words repetitively. You can also split this paragraph into two smaller paragraphs. This may help with the reading.