User:Dyaffa/ATP Challenger Tour/Tyswitzer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Doug Yaffa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dyaffa/ATP Challenger Tour
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * ATP Challenger Tour
 * ATP Challenger Tour

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing the current version and your sandbox draft, I felt that the addition you are making will add great value to the overall article and those viewing. Given that this partnership and the opportunities given to collegiate tennis players is relatively new, you did a great job of jumping on this and being the first to add to it. I thought your section was very clear and straight to the point which made it both easy to read and follow along. One thing that I think might be beneficial to add would be about the opportunities college players received before this partnership (if any) or maybe discuss the struggles of the transition from college to the pro tour. I think this would provide even more detail and relative information to the viewers of this article. Good work!