User:DylanPatel17/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
i chose this because this is the mayor of the closest major city near me. I currently go to Michigan state and Mayor Schor is the mayor of Lansing my states capitol.

Evaluate the article
The article is lackluster to put it lightly. The lead section is short but provides fine detail about what he does and where he previously served. its a very neutral page because there is not much detail. It doesn't go into much other than where he serves, and his career history. there is very little about his personal life or things he has accomplished in his career. There isn't much on the talk page besides an edit made in 2018. The only image is a headshot. Overall this article lacks any type of personality and does nothing but note previous jobs and election wins.