User:Dylandubay1/Plant embryonic development/Un Bear able2012 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dylandubay1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dylandubay1/Plant_embryonic_development?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Plant embryonic development - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
From what I can tell, this is a fairly developed article and the things that are being added are providing a little more context to everything. I think that everything that has been added so far is looking good, if there can be more that is added to the Embryology in Monocots section, I think this would be a very clean series of additions to the overall article.

Response to Peer Review: : I really appreciate this feedback! I am going to reconsider adding to some of the pre-existing paragraphs, as I don't think they are as important as talking about monocot development (as it something that has not been written about in the article.) I think my next steps are refining my explanations so they are more sound. It has been difficult to find information on monocot development, as it is studied less than dicots. Regardless, I will work on finding more info! Thanks for the review!