User:Dylansmitt127/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Battle of Mohács

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I'm heavily interested in history, and I knew a little about this battle and the importance it had for the Ottoman advance into Europe and the end of Hungary as an independent state until after World War 1.

Evaluate the article

 * The lead paragraph is concise and accurate, it makes it easy to read and understand what the article is talking about
 * All of the sources work well
 * The images are well selected and convey what the article is providing
 * Heavy detail in every section, could be considered wordy to newcomers on the topic
 * The article is rated c-class, and is in multiple wiki projects with importance ranging from high to mid
 * Many problems in the talk page have to deal with possible bias towards the Hungarians
 * For a massively important battle, the "Legacy" section seems to be lacking
 * The talk page expands on my statement above, as there was a larger effect than just the Ottomans, Habsburgs, and Hungarians, although it is most important for Hungary
 * The quality of the writing could be improved, and there is many time in the article in which you can notice inexperienced writing
 * There could definitely be more content on such a pivotal battle