User:E.frazin/sandbox

Article Evaluation:

Desmond Paul Henry :

yes it seems as though it is, except the citations are all wrong, and not linked. using a APA style of citation instead of MLA.
 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?

unclear if anything is out of date as the citations are not linked.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

links to the pages of individuals referenced in the article; fixing dead links contained in article;
 * What else could be improved?

yes it seems to be neutral, although it contains no criticism possibly because it is a biographical page, it does not seem to make any outlandish claims.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position

there are no criticisms or critiques from art critics mentioned that I saw. Art critic critique would be important in this case to understand the critical perspective and reception of the work in the context of the public eye.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?