User:E1718r/Life's Gifts/FaeBee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It feels like it needs more on the author and more of a reception history. I know that's not a lot to go off of but it's really all I can think to help