User:E1718r/Life's Gifts/Wesleyatwork Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

E1718r


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:E1718r/Life%27s_Gifts?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think in the first line of your draft the 'Dreams' should be italicized? Unless each of the poems is called a 'Dream' than I think this is intentional. I'm not sure how short poems are supposed to be formatted in the article, especially here where it's so short it can be included, but I think that looks good. "Life's Gifts" should be in quotes and bolded-- I used the article "A Pair of Silk Stockings" as reference for this header decision. Summary could have maybe another sentence-- possibly showing the narrative that her decision was good and could be better in the future by choosing Freedom. Biography part is looking good. If you can include any critical receptions or maybe any analyses of the poem in a new sections, that would balance out the body of the article.

-Wesley