User:EAGMIL/Osmotic shock/Bizzers03 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Sorry I put the first round of peer reviews in the wrong place on 11/28. Here they are in the right place:


 * This is probably part of a different article, but maybe you could include definitions of isotonic, hypertonic, and hypotonic. Or just link them to the articles that define them.
 * Maybe explain what role glycerol plays in helping the cell overcome osmotic stress (in the For hyper-osmotic stress section). Bizzers03 (talk) 19:12, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

2nd round of peer review:


 * honestly, there is nothing else I notice that I would suggest changing
 * the figure you added is a great illustration of the different conditions you talk about
 * you do a great job explaining the different mechanisms that take place in hyper vs hypo-osmotic conditions. Bizzers03 (talk) 02:51, 10 December 2021 (UTC)