User:ECM0815/Inuit Qaujimajatuqangit/BeauFinn1 Peer Review

General info
ECM0815
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ECM0815/Inuit_Qaujimajatuqangit?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Inuit Qaujimajatuqangit

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the idea of adding to the ecological knowlege section and your source about the walruses. I would consider going through the earlier pieces of the article aswell and adding some more general information to each section since they all feel lacking in formation. Overall I reall like this addition to the page because it does help to deepen understanding for the people that read the page