User:ECappBU/User:AustinPetryk/Sociology of Language/JiaxunZhao Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Austin, Wilson, and Long


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AustinPetryk/Sociology_of_Language?action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead is good, including the informations and describing the topic.

Content: The case of the accent which caused a discrimination is a wonderful example. Our society needs dismiss the accent to judge a people because it is unfair.

Tone and balance: The tone is neutral which is good.

Image and media: There is noIt might be good if some small images can added.

Sources and References: he sources are clear. They definitely provide more than 3 reliable sources. The links are working.

Overall impressions: It would be better if we can add more examples to support your WIKI.