User:EEcunning

Articles I am Working on
Lucius Julius Gainius Fabius Agrippa

Improvements made:
 * Sentence clarity
 * Reduced wordiness and complex thoughts
 * Cohesion of thought & flow
 * Sectioning to break up the different points and improve overall accessibility
 * Created sections:
 * Family, Ancestry, and Early Life
 * Work in Apamea
 * Legacy
 * Tone/ Neutral POV
 * Removed section of content defined by Wikipedia as 'Original Research'

Antarctic flora

Improvements made:
 * Cleaned up repeat links
 * Clarity of thought
 * Reworded the first two paragraphs for cohesion and flow
 * Additional sectioning of facts
 * Added the section on origin
 * Improvements to how someone whose specialty is not botany reads and can comprehend the article