User:EGS009/Evolution of cells/MRH2002! Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EGS009


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EGS009/Evolution_of_cells?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Evolution of cells

Evaluate the drafted changes
CONTENT: I think the overall content is informational and necessary but maybe just include where you're going to place this section within the article.

content is clear and concise

good neutral tone

SOURCES: both sources are secondary, current, and reliable, I checked both links and they work

The only other thing I'd add is if this is going to be a new section within the article, I'd suggest adding more information to fit the body of the article.