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Article evaluation: Code
Everything within the article is relevant to it's topic, although something that the article could improve on is adding more information for all the different types of code out there as they only give a few sentences to some while giving entire paragraphs to others. There could be a lot more sources as well, they only have to sources one of which is on journalism while the other is on Morse code, which is talked about but is only a small portion of the article. From what iv'e read they have no sources on anything else on their article so iv'e got to ask, where did they get the information? The talk page is very focused on cleaning up the article but seems to not talk a lot about adding new things to it, at least not recently.

Cabell City
There’s actually a good amount of information on this article, from where the city is, to some history around it. It also has a good amount of sources that seem pretty credible or at least not just spewing words. There are some things that I would like to add however, for instance why was the town abandoned? What is the land being used for, if anything? Etc, etc. Links:  

The first link is to a geographic cite detailing several facts about Cabell city and its surroundings, given that all of it is plain facts like, how far it is above sea level, or what communities are nearby, I don’t think the author of the cite is incorrect or lying about any of their information. Especially given the fact that it was last modified on the twelfth of October. The second website was last modified in 2005 so it’s a little more suspect but considering that it's an exploration cite about ghost towns and abandoned mines I think it can be cut a little slack. The cite goes on to explain some of the history behind the mining town, most of which seems to be about the founder and the town’s final moments by the looks of it. Overall both of these websites seem to be as accurate and unbiased as they can be.

Devourer (Religious/Mythological Archetype)
Currently all that is on this stub article is a few sentences describing what the author believes is a ‘devourer’ archetype, I say believe because the author has no linked sources except to other wiki articles about a few things they bring up such as Satan, Death, Boreas, and Ammit. This, along with how the author stated a devourer is portrayed, leads me to believe that most if not all the article is opinionated to some degree. On that note there are several things I would like to add to this article to spice it up. First off I definitely want to add some more examples of devourer’s, for instance I would add a mention of Nidhogg from Norse mythology who seeks to eat the roots of the World Tree, plunging all of creation into chaos. Another example would be Hati and Skoll, the twin sons of Fenrir who are prophesied to devour the sun and moon. I would also love to add some actual sources to this article to back up anything that I add. Links: Clackamas Links:  |A500910706&v=2.1&u=clackamasccl&it=r&p=AONE&sw=w Google links:  

When it comes down to it, I believe that all of these articles are perfectly okay as they cover myths which are already well known and as such are very difficult to opinionize. On top of that, none of these articles attempted to sell anything or promote something. When it comes down to when the articles were made I don’t see why it would matter given that it’s about a myth older than America. What these articles will do to help me is pretty simple, it will help me diversify the stub article, help me give more examples of devourers.

Ursa Major Cluster
All that is on the stub article about this cluster are some of the bigger things that compose it, how far away it is, how much of the light for the Virgo supercluster it produces and that's it, nothing else. I would add that since 2016 the Ursa major cluster has been renamed to a supergroup, something that the stub article fails to mention even though the most recent edit was in 2017. Another thing that I would add would be that the cluster is speculated to be between 250 and 500 million years old.

Links: Clackamas Library Links:   Google Search link:  

When it comes to the links all of them seem to have been updated/made in 2016 meaning there could be newer information, but I feel confident enough in it to keep them here. One thing that these articles can help me add is information such as the fact that the Ursa Major Cluster has been acknowledged as a supergroup for the past, the supergroup is a line of something like 30 light years long.

Pitch
After thinking about it, I can safely say that I would focus on improving the Devourer stub article. I picked this one for several reasons, primarily I am a huge mythology buff and believe that I can add some diversity in what could be considered a ‘devourer’. The first thing I would do is add some sources, as there are none in the stub article besides some links to other wiki pages which I personally don’t count. When it comes to actual content I would definitely add mentions to Nidhogg, Hati, and Skoll all of whom are from norse mythology and are devourers in what I believe to be a different way than the others who are mentioned in the stub article.