User:ELL0915/Intercultural communication/Ashven20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ELL0915


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ELL0915/Intercultural communication


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Intercultural communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
There hasn't been a lot added. I can see that there was just a small edit done which isn't bad. I feel as though the second sentence of what they started should be changed because of the 'we' included.