User:EN2216/Narrative designer/ARyan9812 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EN2216


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EN2216/Narrative_designer?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Narrative designer

Evaluate the drafted changes
You’ve done a pretty good job adding to this page with the resources you have as I know this is a newer field. I would definitely look for a few more scholarly articles where possible and add a little more content in general. Your tone is very neutral and your points are clear and concise. Overall I would say that you could build on your research a fair bit more leading up to the research paper but I feel you added a sufficient amount of good information to enhance this article.