User:EN2216/Narrative designer/CaitlynRCooper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EN2216


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:EN2216/Narrative designer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Narrative designer

Lead

 * Lead content has been created and added to the wiki article. The content added is relevant and can be used to expand the article in the body.
 * Check for grammar and punctuation within the content added to the article and in sandbox.

Content & Organization

 * There is really clear organization with the content. It makes it easy to read and place within the article.
 * Your organization within the talk page also helped me find what was new content, which was nice.
 * Maybe use text editing to make it clearer what is your content and what is existing within your talk page, just to make it easier to read and edit.
 * The sentence about Jay Posey could be moved to a body paragraph and be used to expand on information within the article.

Tone

 * The tone is neutral and reads very clearly!