User:ENGL2730-YG/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Madeline

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This was one of my favorite book series growing up and I vividly remember reading these with my sisters and looking at the illustrations.

Evaluate the article
Evaluating Content:


 * All of the information on the page is relevant, nothing distracted me
 * Nothing out of date
 * No equity gaps as far as I can see

Evaluating Tone:


 * The tone of the article does seem to be neutral
 * The article isn't super detailed in the first place so there isn't one viewpoint that is overrepresented or underrepresented

Evaluating Sources:


 * There aren't that many sources in this article, mostly because most of the information is the names of books and the names of characters
 * There need to be more references included in this article

Talk Page


 * This article doesn't have many comments on the Talk Page, so I don't think many convos are going on behind the scenes
 * The article is part of the WikiProject Books and WikiProject Children's Literature

Suggestions for Editing
The page doesn't touch upon any of the themes that the books covers such as the themes of camaraderie and childhood development, which I think is worth discussing. I also think that the page could go into a little more depth of the way that rhythm and repetition are used in these books, as they are something that's constant and distinguishable among all Madeline books.