User:ENOZIW/Gender discrimination during Hong Kong protest/Taughey Peer Review

Hi Liana, interesting topic, I did not know this was an issue in the Hong Kong protests. I’m not sure I am looking at the complete draft, please redirect me if you have work saved elsewhere (other than the sandbox draft for ‘gender discrimination during Hong Kong protest’). I’m curious where your addition will live on Wikipedia. For example will it be a section on the existing page for the protests (2019–2020 Hong Kong protests)? From the paragraph I can see that you’ve written, it seems to focus on the actions of police. If that’s the main focus, there is a section on police misconduct in the Hong Kong protests page (although maybe you would want to create a new section to highlight that it is gender-specific not just general misconduct). You might also want to link to other articles on gendered actions by police more widely beyond the Hong Kong protests. I’m happy to look at more or your work if you let me know where the work is saved! - Sarah Taughey (talk) 23:42, 18 March 2022 (UTC)