User:ENorth3/Red Tape/Sallyfried Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ENorth3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ENorth3/Red_Tape?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Red tape

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a very well reviewed wikipedia article. I think the section with the most information, Administrative Burden, is very well researched and I really appreciated the tie-in to gendered issues. I think the only thing I would add to this section is more information that talks about gender if possible.

The information is up to date and neutral and adds a lens to this issue that was not previously present.

I also think the citations are very good and every piece of information is cited properly.

Overall I think Emma is definitely helping to fix this article and could go even further with organization and adding information to the article to make it even more well-rounded.