User:ESenvironment/Hot Cities/Joey.becker99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ESenvironment


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ESenvironment/Hot Cities
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hot Cities

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

-The lead has been updated slightly, helps provide more detail on specific cities in series & altogether a clear summary of topic.

-Potentially another contextual sentence between the list of cities and sentence about climate refugees would help.

Content:

-The episode list is definitely relevant to topic (obviously, adding all episodes/descriptions would help round out the article)*.

-It doesn’t seem like any content is missing but definitely research as much as possible to see if there’s any more information past just the episode list.

* IMBD shows eight episodes for the series but another site shows a ninth article about Copenhagen ( https://simkl.com/tv/17730/hot-cities/episodes/# ).

Tone/Balance:

-There doesn’t appear to be any bias or subjectivity.

Sources/References:

-All are relevant and the original sources properly back up what is stated in the article.

-Only the 7th reference seems to be slightly dated (is there a newer reference available for this point?)

-All links are working!

Organization:

-Logical structure of introduction and then list of episodes.

-No grammar issues (aside from capitalizing the title of the second episode).

Images/Media:

-No issues.

Overall:

-Seems to be a great start! I would just finish the episode list and descriptions and then do some research to see if there is any other relevant info that can be added. Maybe adding more comprehensive descriptions for each episode would strengthen the article (this might require watching each video though).