User:ETstem/Two-photon photoelectron spectroscopy/Logan753 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ETstem


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ETstem/Two-photon_photoelectron_spectroscopy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Two-photon photoelectron spectroscopy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * No changes were made to the lead paragraph

Content


 * The content already given in the article defines what two photon photoelectron spectroscopy is and the dynamics of it. The added information talks about the practical applications of it, which is informative and relevant.

Tone/Balance


 * The tone is neutral and informative.

Sources/References


 * The sources are good so far from what I can see.

Organization


 * The paragraphs are organized well. I would recommend adding the last paragraph in your sandbox to the last part of introduction in the article where it says: "This technique has been used for many different types of materials to study a variety of exotic electron behaviors, including image potential states at metal surfaces, and electron dynamics at molecular interfaces."

Images and Media


 * The added image is relevant and easy to understand.

Overall Impressions


 * Looks like a great addition to Wikipedia!