User:EWoo95/sandbox

Peer Review of Group 8:

-move the History section up towards the beginning of the article

-the first word in the Causes section is not capitalized

-in the first section- adding a hyperlink to the wikipedia page for behavioral therapy inn order to provide some background info to those unfamiliar with what behavioral therapy is

-in the epidemiology section- do not start a sentence with a number

-under Causes section- think about moving the first two sentences to another/its own section/in the Impact section

-suggest placing the Cause and the Impact sections next to each other

-in the Causes section it is stated that caffeine intake causes enuresis and that those age 12 to 24 consume more caffeine, but it does not mention the incidence of enuria in this age group-maybe include some info on the incidence in this population

-add a hyperlink for nocturnal polyurea wikipedia page to provide background info

-under Management- consider moving the Medications section above the Acupuncture section in order to follow the order in which they were listed in the intro section Brignance Inventory of Early Development (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brigance_Inventory_of_Early_Development_(IED_ii)) - I would add citations to the article as there are none - I would add background information so those unfamiliar with the topic could understand the article - I would add more in depth information as the page basically just contains bullet points