User:Eaheller13/Language deprivation in deaf and hard of hearing children/Ambenicole Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eaheller13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eaheller13/Language deprivation in deaf and hard of hearing children


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * This is a new article.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Excellent job guys! Your article interesting, concise, and very informative. Honestly other than a few minor things I think you're good to post it now.

Three things I noticed that could improved:


 * Instead of having a title labeled introduction, you got just write in the space before the "Contents".
 * I saw you linked to a few other Wikipedia articles in the "Critical Period" section, but try to link to other articles where you can in the other sections as well, because it helps your article gain more traffic.
 * The citations in the "Introduction", "Typical Language Development for Deaf and Hard of Hearing Children", "Legislation", and a few of the citations in the "Critical Period", "General Education", and "Bilingual-Biculture" sections don't work. Make sure the citations are highlighted blue, that is how they link readers to original source.