User:Eaheller13/Language deprivation in deaf and hard of hearing children/Jtruso3 Peer Review

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First of all, the topic is amazing to read. I am quite familiar with this kind of topic myself, but I still learned many things from this. For feedbacks, I would suggest to break down your contents a little more. For each main topic, there is quite a lot information in one go. You can add some sub headline to "group up" the points. That would clear up and easier to read. Also, it would help the readers understand the content better. Other suggestion is add some statistics if it is possible (I know how hard it is to find some data for this) plus some pictures of charts or whatever. It would make your page looks awesome. Keep it up with the works!!!!