User:Eanneyrey/Open relationship/Charris0524 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eanneyrey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eanneyrey/Open_relationship?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Open relationship

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the changes that you are proposing here. I definitely agree that some of the info is either out of date, poorly written, or straight up unsupported. I really like the use of statistics and supported facts, I think those are two crucial elements of a good wikipedia article. I think it would be good to add information about threesomes and orgies. I genuinely am just asking because I do not know and am curious but are threesomes considered part of an open relationship? I'm curious if you have found any stats on the prevalence of these things. I think adding a note about the stigma and stereotypes about open relationships is important. It may even warrant its own section to be entirely honest. I think personally, before entering this class I truthfully did not have a positive view on open relationships and I think that sentiment is common. It will be important and difficult to balance on the line of reporting just the facts and not putting forward your own opinion if you decide to pursue that kind of section, but I think it is important to note.

Overall, you have a great draft with some really key edits. I do not have many suggestions and I am excited to see what you produce!