User:Eapostle/Filter bubble/Rathtmoseleyjr Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Eapostle
 * Filter bubble

Content Review

 * Tons of information provided.
 * Information can be more concise.
 * Example; in the "Platform studies" section, the paragraphs are extremely long and appear to be dragged out.
 * You could possibly try to break the paragraphs up by finding good spots where new points are being added.
 * The first several sentences of this section could use additional work to limit the amount of words used.
 * Multiple sections of quoted articles but is is difficult to differentiate on what is being quoted and what is summarized.
 * Under Counter measures: "By individuals," could use some editing as it appears to hold some opinions within the content.
 * Instead of providing information about filter bubbles, the content is explaining how to break through it.
 * This article section is giving off more opinions that facts it appears.
 * Some of the sourced work here is coming from blogs and non-scholarly articles it appears.
 * The last section titled "Extensions of the concept" could be expanded upon.
 * With this term filter bubble being coined around 2011, there may be new articles today that can correlate other relating terms
 * You could find these articles to add here for users of Wikipedia to find similar concepts that help expand upon or even elaborate on other social media terms that have an effect on filter bubble.