User:Earth sci kid/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Mono Lake.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it's about a topic I have some basic knowledge about. Mono Lake is a notable geographic location in California and has had societal impacts with regards to California's water wars. The top of the article has a banner saying it may be too technical for most readers to understand. I was surprised by how in-depth the science is on this article especially the "Tufa Chemistry" section.

Evaluate the article
The article is very thorough but I think it borderlines on being too thorough. In the talk section, someone pointed out how Wikipedia is supposed to function as an encyclopedia and that this article gets too technical for the average civilian.