User:EartmanW/EcoCheyenne/Noodles7441 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EartmanW


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EartmanW/EcoCheyenne?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EartmanW/EcoCheyenne?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead paragraph has enough adequate information for a lead, but I do feel you could re-write it to make it sounds a little more put together. Otherwise I do like that it is straight forward and clearly explains who EcoCheyenne are and what they represent.

Content

The content is very good, but I do feel you could add more information overall. I feel like there is more room to add onto what EcoCheyenne is about or what they are currently doing as well as past protest/outcomes of past protests.

Tone and Balance

The tone of your article is very good and you were able to maintain a neutral tone throughout the article.

Sources and References

You have minimal sources which is understandable, but majority comes from books. Which is understandable, but i wasn't able to verify that your sources are in correlation with your topic. I also do feel like there could be more sources added to further back what you are saying.

Organization

I do feel this article is unorganized, but it could easily be fixed by adding more context to the article and also putting it in order of events.

'''Overall '''Overall the article is nicely written and I like that it is straight to the point, but my concern is that there should be more context into the article, better references, and organizing the article a little better. Otherwise, this article is really good and clearly explains EcoCheyenne