User:Easynsimple/Fast fashion/Hazel42121 Peer Review

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Easynsimple
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Did not see anything on the article sandbox or bibliography pages, please let me know if I am wrong!