User:Eb1002/Asian Elephant/Alexis D Wagner Peer Review

 2022/11/06 Second Peer Review 

Good use of linking to other articles

Maybe explain what the "vomeronasal organ" is in a sentence or two

So far this looks really great. Grammatically it looks good as well. You do a great job of showcasing the chemical ecology side of the Asian Elephants. The two paragraphs you mentioned adding will also add a lot of chemical ecology relevant information. Great job so far! If you want me to read over it again before you transfer your entire project just slack me! Great job so far!!

 First Peer Review 

This is overall a good start. I think you did a good job of giving the overall reproduction summary. I know you had a couple of spots were you wanted to add more information, I would just make sure to add specifics about how those chemicals interact with one another through their chemical allelopathy or overall chemical interactions and the benefit of these chemicals and why they are so essential. I think you also did a great job of linking articles, which makes it a lot easier to understand. Great work!

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eb1002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eb1002/Asian_Elephant?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Asian elephant
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Asian elephant

Evaluate the drafted changes
Thank you so much for your feedback! I will be sure to include more chemical specific information in my final product.

Eb1002/Asian Elephant