User:Eb1002/Body odor/Teenuh1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Eb1002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Eb1002/Body odor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Body odor

Lead
I noticed in the original article that there was not an explicit definition of "body odor" given, so I thought that might be something important to add.

Content
The information you're planning on adding sounds good! It'll be extremely relevant to the topic, and I think it makes sense to add the information to the existing "humans" section, rather making a whole new one.

Sources & References
The citations for this section looks good, and the links work! I couldn't see what the sources for 1-2 were though.

Thank you for your feedback! I will go back and check the citations to see why they are not working.

New Peer Review

Your draft is looking good, especially the "alterations" section! I still couldn't see the citations for 1-2 in your sandbox draft, but I did check the article and saw them there. The hyperlinks to separate pages were also a great addition; since sebaceous and apocrine glands were already linked earlier in the article, I think it would be fine if you didn't link them in your section.