User:Ebbahooft/Dioscorea dumetorum/Salehi.Hana Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EbbaHooft


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ebbahooft/Dioscorea_dumetorum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dioscorea dumetorum

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The Lead is concise and presents a good overview of what is discussed in the article.

The content is good and informative, as well as neutral/non-leading. I think Ebba's introduced information does help add knowledge and helps to further the article.

If there were any improvements I could think of, maybe some images could have been added, such as what the yams look like once they're hardened, or other images of them being cultivated.