User:Ebdrake/Reduced affect display/Emnets Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ebdrake


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Reduced affect display
 * Reduced affect display

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes in seance structure and grammar were very helpful. The way in which the original author presented information on schizophrenia was confusing, so the changes made the information more accurately convey the research. I believe Brianna did a great job including the neuroscience research! It was a very interesting and important contribution. She also did a great job using reliable sources of information as citations. Overall, great work!