User:Ebtapper/Electric bacteria/AguaPika Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ebtapper


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ebtapper/Electric_bacteria?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I thought the lead was good for the most part. I would introduce a little bit about the applications of these microbes so that readers know what to expect when you get to your " Application" section. Also carful how you word things. Wording is a little confusing on your last sentence of your "Lead" paragraph.