User:Ecaldero/Organometallic chemistry/Odowdall Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ecaldero


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Organometallic Chemistry
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Organometallic chemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
This paragraph goes into a bit more detail and clarification about the 18-electron rule, it's exceptions and some examples of it's applications. I think this article benefits from the clarifications on exceptions of the 18-electron rule. The section on ligand classification definitely elevates the article, adding some detail about formalism that one would expect to see when reading into the topic.

While it is not entirely necessary, these additions could benefit from some visual aid regarding the examples given. Particularly in the context of geometry (coordination) visualization can help.

I think the changes made to this paragraph add clarification and depth to the section of the article. For a "Concepts and Techniques" section, there is very little concepts in the original paragraph.