User:Ecaldwell97/Carprofen/Chaz Hodge Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ecaldwell97


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ecaldwell97/Carprofen


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Carprofen

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article reads neutrally and is well written. The use of bullet points for the side effects makes them easily distinguishable and easy to read. It is lacking a lot of citations that the posted article includes so you might want to open the article in edit mode and paste the citations into your sandbox. They don't copy over unless you have the original article in edit mode. It could also use a section about the actual use in dogs before the adverse effects section. Probably something similar to what is given for human and equine use. You could use "Carprofen is 1 of 11 approved NSAID drugs for use in dogs" as a starting sentence for it. Otherwise, it looks like a great draft.